|As per randomcelestial's request, I've uploaded one of his…|
Dec. 5th, 2004 @ 03:43 pm
As per randomcelestial
's request, I've uploaded one of his recordings.Writing You (live)
(edited a few times to mess with hosting of the mp3)
this little brit girl is verrrrry impressed. jealous, but impressed.
damn inspirational, too!
I'll start with some self-critique:
this recording is much too monotone.
I don't have enough inflection or volume shifts, and because there are two significant shifts in the poem:
"...if just for one girl, you"
"let my .... lightning rod"
it should be clear and obvious. Other people should be able to pick the lines out for me. I think I made up for it that night with a lot of physical choreography, which I was focusing on, and so I neglected the vocal script.
the ending is a bit too whispery, and doesn't emphasize the rhyming couplet.
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